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Re: he plays with fire
Yeah, so the "upside umop" thing, that was incredibly original. Kudos to you for that. I loved the romance in the story, and I really like the realistic addition, that ...
Dec 10, 2005 -
Re: My mystique groom
Agreed, it was beautiful. However, I was able to provide some criticism. Your rhyme scheme, though cleverly placed in some areas, was choppy in others. Also, that line, "Fall for ...
Dec 10, 2005 -
Re: Apocalyptic Smush
This evoked very tasteful images, and I say tasteful under several different contexts. It was a wonderful poem, and just because of my predisposition to honor original flow patterns as ...
Dec 5, 2005